Quick Answer

To write a LinkedIn summary that attracts recruiters: open with a strong first two lines that hook before the "See more" cutoff, include your target job title and top keywords naturally throughout, back your claims with at least one specific achievement, write in first person, and close with a clear call to action. The About section is indexed by LinkedIn's search algorithm — treat it like SEO copy for your career.

Why Your LinkedIn About Section Is Your Most Valuable Career Real Estate

A recruiter at a global staffing firm once described how she finds candidates for hard-to-fill roles: she runs a LinkedIn Recruiter search, filters by skills and location, and then opens five to ten profiles in quick succession. She spends roughly 10 seconds on each one before deciding whether to read further. The deciding factor in almost every case — the headline and the first two lines of the About section.

Most profiles fail this test. The About section is either blank, copy-pasted from a resume, or written in the third person like a press release from 2011. According to LinkedIn's own data, profiles with a completed About section receive up to 30 times more weekly views than those without one. The candidates who get found are not always the most qualified — they are the ones whose profiles are written to be found.

Your LinkedIn About section is not a biography. It is a search-optimised pitch to the specific recruiters looking for someone exactly like you.

The "See More" Problem — and Why Your First Two Lines Are Everything

LinkedIn truncates the About section after approximately 300 characters on desktop and even fewer on mobile, replacing the rest with a "See more" link. This means the majority of people who land on your profile will never read past your opening two sentences unless those sentences give them a compelling reason to click.

Write your first two sentences as if they are the only thing a recruiter will ever read. They should answer: who you are, what you do, and why that matters — all in under 40 words. Everything after that is context for people who are already interested.

Weak opening (gets ignored): "I am a results-driven professional with over 6 years of experience in the technology sector. I am passionate about innovation and thrive in fast-paced environments where I can…"

Strong opening (gets clicked): "I help B2B SaaS companies turn complex products into things people actually want to use. Over 6 years I've taken 4 products from 0 to launch — most recently a platform that hit $3M ARR in year one."

The Best Structure for a LinkedIn About Section

A recruiter-optimised LinkedIn summary has five functional components. Each one has a specific job — and none of them is "fill up the word count."

01 — The Hook (Before the Cutoff) — ~40 words

Your strongest, most searchable opening. State what you do, who you do it for, and one proof point that makes a recruiter want to read more. Write this as if it is the only thing they will see.

  • Lead with your value, not your job title or years of experience.
  • Include your primary target keyword (e.g. "Product Manager," "UX Designer," "Data Analyst") naturally in the first sentence.
  • One specific achievement or number makes this dramatically more memorable.

02 — What You Do (The Core Value Paragraph) — ~60 words

Expand on your hook. Describe the problems you solve, the industries you work in, and the type of work you are known for. This is where your secondary keywords and skill terms live.

  • Use the same language as job descriptions for your target role.
  • Mention 2–3 specific skills, tools, or methodologies by name.
  • Keep it specific to your niche — avoid describing every industry you have ever touched.

03 — What You Have Done (Evidence) — ~70 words

Two or three specific achievements that prove the claims in your hook and core paragraph. This is the section most people skip — and the section that most separates good profiles from great ones.

  • Include at least one number, percentage, or measurable outcome.
  • Reference the type of company, team size, or scale where relevant — context makes achievements credible.
  • Do not repeat your entire job history — pick the highlights that are most relevant to your target role.

04 — What You Are Looking For (Openness Signal) — ~40 words

A clear, direct statement of what you are open to. Recruiters need to know immediately whether you are actively looking, passively open, or only interested in specific types of roles. Vagueness here wastes everyone's time.

  • Name the type of role, industry, or company stage you are targeting.
  • Mention remote, hybrid, or location preferences if relevant.
  • If you are not actively looking, say you are open to conversations about specific types of opportunities.

05 — Call to Action (How to Reach You) — ~20 words

Tell recruiters exactly how to contact you. LinkedIn messaging is fine, but adding your email removes friction entirely. The easier you make it to reach you, the more likely a recruiter will.

  • Include your professional email address if you are actively job searching.
  • Link to a portfolio, GitHub, or personal site if relevant to your role.
  • Keep it one or two sentences — do not over-explain.

How Long Should a LinkedIn Summary Be?

LinkedIn allows up to 2,600 characters — but longer is not better. The sweet spot is 1,200–1,800 characters (roughly 200–300 words). The cutoff point is around 300 characters — that is all most people see before "See more." Long enough to include your keywords and achievements; short enough that a recruiter who does click "See more" actually finishes reading it.

What Keywords Should I Include — and Where?

LinkedIn's search algorithm — used by recruiters running searches in LinkedIn Recruiter — indexes the text across your entire profile, but the About section carries significant weight. Including your target keywords here is the single highest-leverage optimisation you can make.

  • Job title keywords — Use the job title as it appears in postings: "Product Manager," not "Product Guru." Include variations if common: "UX Designer / UI Designer."
  • Hard skills — Name them explicitly: "Python," "Figma," "Google Analytics," "Agile," "SQL," "Salesforce." Do not assume they are implied by your job titles.
  • Industry terms — "B2B SaaS," "fintech," "e-commerce," "enterprise software," "D2C." Recruiters often filter by industry — include the terms they use.
  • Problem language — "Reducing churn," "scaling revenue," "improving conversion," "building from zero." This matches how job descriptions frame requirements.

Copy five to ten job descriptions for your target role into a document. Highlight every skill, tool, and phrase that appears in more than two of them. These are your priority keywords. Work them naturally into your About section — do not keyword-stuff, but do not leave them out either. The same principle that drives ATS optimisation on your resume applies to LinkedIn search optimisation.

Word-for-Word Examples by Career Stage

Example 1 — Experienced Professional (Tech)

Senior Software Engineer · 8 years experience · Targeting remote roles (~260 words)

I build the backend infrastructure that keeps high-traffic products running at scale. Over 8 years I've worked across fintech and SaaS, most recently leading the API architecture for a payments platform processing $2B in annual transactions.

My focus is distributed systems, API design, and performance optimisation. I work primarily in Python and Go, with deep experience in AWS, Kubernetes, and PostgreSQL. I care about building systems that are not just functional but genuinely maintainable — the kind that engineers joining a year later are glad they inherited.

A few things I'm proud of: reducing API response times by 60% through a caching architecture overhaul; leading a team of 6 through a zero-downtime migration to microservices; and mentoring three junior engineers who have since moved into senior roles.

I'm currently open to senior or staff engineering roles at remote-first companies — ideally in fintech, infrastructure, or developer tools. I'm particularly interested in teams where engineers have genuine influence on architecture decisions, not just ticket queues.

Best way to reach me: alex@email.com or DM here on LinkedIn.

Example 2 — Recent Graduate / Entry Level

Marketing Graduate · No formal experience · Targeting first role (~220 words)

I'm a marketing graduate who has spent the last two years actually doing marketing — not just studying it. I managed social media for two student organisations, grew a combined audience from under 500 to over 4,000 followers, and completed freelance content projects for three small businesses.

My focus is content strategy, organic social, and SEO — the intersection of creativity and data that I find genuinely interesting. I work comfortably in Canva, Later, Google Analytics, and Notion. I'm equally comfortable writing a 2,000-word blog post and interpreting a performance report to figure out why it did or did not land.

My dissertation — on the effect of short-form video on brand recall in Gen Z — gave me a research foundation that I want to bring into a real marketing environment. I think there's a real gap between what the data says and what most brands actually do with it.

I'm actively looking for entry-level or junior marketing roles — ideally at a company where content and performance are treated as two sides of the same strategy, not separate departments. Open to remote or hybrid roles across the UK.

Feel free to reach out: jamie@email.com

Example 3 — Career Changer

Former Teacher → Instructional Designer · Actively pivoting (~230 words)

After six years in secondary education — including three as a Head of Department — I'm bringing everything I know about how people learn into the world of corporate learning and instructional design.

Teaching at scale taught me to design for diverse learners, communicate complex ideas without jargon, and measure whether understanding has actually landed — not just whether content was delivered. Those skills translate directly into e-learning design, LMS management, and learning programme strategy.

Over the past 18 months I've been deliberately building toward this move: CPTD certified, two full e-learning modules built in Articulate Rise, and a pro bono project redesigning volunteer onboarding for a national charity — reducing onboarding time by 35%.

I'm looking for an instructional designer or L&D specialist role — ideally at an organisation that sees learning as a strategic function rather than a compliance checkbox. Remote or hybrid. Open to contract or permanent.

Portfolio and contact: morgan@email.com · morganjones.design

The Most Common LinkedIn About Section Mistakes

  • Leaving it blank. A blank About section is invisible to LinkedIn's search algorithm and signals to recruiters that the profile is not actively maintained. Even a rough version is better than nothing.
  • Writing in third person. "Sarah is a passionate marketer with a decade of experience…" reads like a press release written by someone else. Write as yourself, in first person, directly to the reader.
  • Copying your resume bullet points. Your resume and your LinkedIn profile are read in different contexts by different people. The About section should add narrative and personality that a bullet-point resume cannot.
  • Generic claims with no evidence. "Results-driven," "strategic thinker," "passionate about innovation" — these phrases appear on millions of profiles and mean nothing without a specific example to back them up.
  • No call to action. If a recruiter finishes reading your About section and wants to reach out, make it easy. Your email address, a portfolio link, or even "feel free to DM me" dramatically reduces friction.
  • Ignoring keywords. If your About section does not contain the terms recruiters search for, your profile will not appear in their results — regardless of how well-written it is. Optimise for the algorithm first, then refine for the human reader.

Beyond the About Section: What Else Recruiters Check

The About section gets you found and clicked — but recruiters do not stop there. Once your profile appears in their search results, these are the other elements they check immediately:

  • Headline — the single line under your name. Include your job title keyword and one differentiating detail. "Product Manager" is weak. "Product Manager · B2B SaaS · 0-to-1 Products" is searchable and specific.
  • Profile photo — profiles with a professional photo receive significantly more views. It does not need to be studio quality — clear, well-lit, and professional is enough.
  • Open to Work signal — setting your Open to Work preferences (visible only to recruiters, or publicly via the green frame) increases recruiter outreach significantly for active job seekers.
  • Experience section — each role should have at least two to three bullet points with specific achievements, not just a job description copy-paste. The same quantification principles that apply to your ATS resume apply here.
  • Skills section — add all relevant skills explicitly. LinkedIn's algorithm uses the Skills section heavily for search matching. Endorsed skills carry more weight — ask colleagues to endorse your top skills.

LinkedIn About Section Checklist

  • Hook written for the cutoff — first two sentences work as a standalone pitch before "See more."
  • Primary keyword in sentence one — exact job title as it appears in postings you are targeting.
  • 3–5 secondary keywords included — tools, skills, and industry terms mirrored from target job descriptions.
  • At least one quantified achievement — number, percentage, or measurable outcome.
  • Written in first person — no third-person bio language.
  • Openness signal included — what you are looking for, what type of role, remote or hybrid preference.
  • Call to action at the end — email address or clear instruction on how to reach you.
  • 1,200–1,800 characters — long enough to be substantive, short enough to be read.
  • Headline updated — includes job title keyword and one differentiating detail.
  • Open to Work set — recruiter-only or public visibility configured in job preferences.

Once your LinkedIn profile is optimised, the next step is making sure your resume passes ATS screening when you apply. Run it through the free Resume Checker for an instant keyword match score and formatting report before you submit. See the ATS Checker on the site.

Sources: LinkedIn Talent Solutions (profile view data and recruiter behaviour research); LinkedIn Economic Graph team; Jobvite Recruiter Nation Report; Society for Human Resource Management (SHRM) sourcing data.